dhinam dhinam undhan gyabhagham
enghum edhilum undhan uruvam...
ketkum paadalgalil yellam un kural
irutilum kanghiren un nizhal...
enghum edhilum undhan uruvam...
ketkum paadalgalil yellam un kural
irutilum kanghiren un nizhal...
nugharum kaatril yellam un vaasam
marakavillai unnai oru nalum
ninaipayaa ennai oru nodiyavathu...
11 comments:
dai saniyane.....I loved it all it was damn touching especially the last statement was amazing.....
maccchi..nice one..but in the last one..'naalum' and 'nodi' did not rhyme..probably 'ganam' instead of 'nodi' would be better!!!
Dey, Super aa irukku! Especially, iruttilum unthan nizhal...amazing! But, couplets aa yezhuthirukke illa, athula first line and second line concept la relationship ye illa - antha maadiri next time try pannu. Otherwise, each line by itself, wonderful ma!
All kavithai thogupu touching da mama..I dont know that u will write kavithai in college days.. Super keep going...
Unakkul oru kavizhan marainthullan
thanga surangam pola
yaral athu thati yezhupapatatho !!!
Antha ragisiyathe ennidum solvaya...
Tamil la ezhuthuda it would be better....
hey arul why don't u translate also? :P
Machi I dont care abt others opinion da. U made me cry maapi.... Eppadi da unnala maathram ippadi?
nalla kavidhai arul avargale ... aanal aval yaar endru sollamaleye poi vitergale
hari - nejamavaaa...aiyoo ivalo seriousaa affect panumnuu nenaikavey illai...anywasys thnks...
arths - ennamoo theriyathe mathiri kekuriyee...:p
translated versn is superbbb :)
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